Post by josh on Dec 4, 2013 1:36:46 GMT
this is my book called Great Escape that i am working on i hope you enjoy it
It was a sunny day in the small town of Summerville, when John was going to school. It was one month until his summer break. He has been looking forward to this. John was in 11th grade and he goes to see his grandparents. He loves them so much he gets to see them every two weeks, but this time he could spend more time with them.
They lived off a huge lake he would spend hours out there he would love to swim in the summer and go fishing with his grandfather while his grandmother would make pies. He never wanted to go home he felt so happy there. He felt like that was his second home he loved every moment when he was there. John had a imaginary friend name Tim. He was a great friend they did everything together. His grandparents would seem them at the lake fishing or playing hide in seek and heard laughing, they knew they was great friends.
“So, Tim, what do you want to play today?” John asked.
Tim closed his eyes and thought about it. “How about we play eye spy?"
"sure" said John.
“I would go first.” Said Tim. “I spy with my little eye, something blue”
“hmm, the lake?” said John.
“Yea, that's right.”
“My turn.” said John “I spy with my little eye, something brown.
“That's a tough one.” said Tim “It's the tree bark.”
“No.” said John “Guess one more time.”
“Ok. It's the dock.”
“Yea, there you go.” said John. John and Tim kept playing that game for one more hour and then they decided to play hide and seek.
The next day John had to pack his bags because it was time for him to go back home with his parents.
“So how was your weekend with your grandparents?” said Mom.
"It was good me and Tim were having so much fun yesterday" John replied.
"That's nice"
John was a great student at Water Falls High. He made all A's in school he was a great student---he was also a very popular student. He was like a celebrity in high school. He was a handsome kid. As he was walking to his 1st class his friend Joe came up to him. They were great friends. They have been friends since they were both two years old.
“So, John, how was your weekend?” Joe asked.
“It was good” John said.
John and Joe are neighbors. They are often seen as brothers. They have a great friendship-they would often go to their favorite place after school called ‘The Joint’. It was a restaurant that sold both American food and Japanese food. John loved the burgers he would get one with ketchup, mustard, onions and their secret sauce. It was so good, but Joe loved to get the sushi. He loved the calf roll. It was so good as well. They been going there since they started at Water Falls High.
John like to pull pranks on his friend he called himself the king of pranks, but Joe was also pretty good. He one time made John think someone stole his car, but in fact Joe had remote and was controlling it and Joe was laughing so hard that his stomach hurt. John later found out it was a joke, and he laughed. They loved to pull pranks on each other it was so funny
“So, John, what you doing this summer break? Me and my family are going camping in Georgia at Tray Mountain.” Joe said.
“Joe, I’ve been there on vacation.” John said.
“We went to see the blue angels it was fun.” Joe said.
“Yea. I bet” John said.
John loved to go to Georgia, but John also loved his home in Flordia. Joe couldn’t wait until summer break. It was only 4 weeks left until they left. He was so excited that he would sometimes jump. Tim was also couldn’t wait. He loved seeing the Georgia trees, especially in the fall time. It was his favorite season but he hated winter. It got too cold for him, but John liked winter a little but loved spring and summer because he gets go on vacations in summer. One time he went to California and saw the golden gate bridge. He went to restaurant called ‘In and Out Burger’. He liked it, but still like ‘Joint’. John also liked a place called ‘Five Guys’ when he went to Georgia one year."So John why do you love Georgia","well for one i loved to go camping on trey mounatain,and see the Blue Angles
the next day it was fun,also i got friends in Tybee Island.I allways had fun seeing them We often spend,the
weekend and i would love to hear the sounds of the ocean.That is the best sound to fall alsleep to and i
loved to see the lighthouse and go in it".John really loved Georgia almost as much he loved Flordia he thought
the people there were so nice.They made him feel welcomed and John still rembers when he went to Paris France
one year and he saw and went to the top of the eiffle tower and saw the city of Paris and was a great view.He
also like to eat the croissants.He had such a great time he did not want to leave but one day he would come
back that was a goal he had set.
It was a sunny day in the small town of Summerville, when John was going to school. It was one month until his summer break. He has been looking forward to this. John was in 11th grade and he goes to see his grandparents. He loves them so much he gets to see them every two weeks, but this time he could spend more time with them.
They lived off a huge lake he would spend hours out there he would love to swim in the summer and go fishing with his grandfather while his grandmother would make pies. He never wanted to go home he felt so happy there. He felt like that was his second home he loved every moment when he was there. John had a imaginary friend name Tim. He was a great friend they did everything together. His grandparents would seem them at the lake fishing or playing hide in seek and heard laughing, they knew they was great friends.
“So, Tim, what do you want to play today?” John asked.
Tim closed his eyes and thought about it. “How about we play eye spy?"
"sure" said John.
“I would go first.” Said Tim. “I spy with my little eye, something blue”
“hmm, the lake?” said John.
“Yea, that's right.”
“My turn.” said John “I spy with my little eye, something brown.
“That's a tough one.” said Tim “It's the tree bark.”
“No.” said John “Guess one more time.”
“Ok. It's the dock.”
“Yea, there you go.” said John. John and Tim kept playing that game for one more hour and then they decided to play hide and seek.
The next day John had to pack his bags because it was time for him to go back home with his parents.
“So how was your weekend with your grandparents?” said Mom.
"It was good me and Tim were having so much fun yesterday" John replied.
"That's nice"
John was a great student at Water Falls High. He made all A's in school he was a great student---he was also a very popular student. He was like a celebrity in high school. He was a handsome kid. As he was walking to his 1st class his friend Joe came up to him. They were great friends. They have been friends since they were both two years old.
“So, John, how was your weekend?” Joe asked.
“It was good” John said.
John and Joe are neighbors. They are often seen as brothers. They have a great friendship-they would often go to their favorite place after school called ‘The Joint’. It was a restaurant that sold both American food and Japanese food. John loved the burgers he would get one with ketchup, mustard, onions and their secret sauce. It was so good, but Joe loved to get the sushi. He loved the calf roll. It was so good as well. They been going there since they started at Water Falls High.
John like to pull pranks on his friend he called himself the king of pranks, but Joe was also pretty good. He one time made John think someone stole his car, but in fact Joe had remote and was controlling it and Joe was laughing so hard that his stomach hurt. John later found out it was a joke, and he laughed. They loved to pull pranks on each other it was so funny
“So, John, what you doing this summer break? Me and my family are going camping in Georgia at Tray Mountain.” Joe said.
“Joe, I’ve been there on vacation.” John said.
“We went to see the blue angels it was fun.” Joe said.
“Yea. I bet” John said.
John loved to go to Georgia, but John also loved his home in Flordia. Joe couldn’t wait until summer break. It was only 4 weeks left until they left. He was so excited that he would sometimes jump. Tim was also couldn’t wait. He loved seeing the Georgia trees, especially in the fall time. It was his favorite season but he hated winter. It got too cold for him, but John liked winter a little but loved spring and summer because he gets go on vacations in summer. One time he went to California and saw the golden gate bridge. He went to restaurant called ‘In and Out Burger’. He liked it, but still like ‘Joint’. John also liked a place called ‘Five Guys’ when he went to Georgia one year."So John why do you love Georgia","well for one i loved to go camping on trey mounatain,and see the Blue Angles
the next day it was fun,also i got friends in Tybee Island.I allways had fun seeing them We often spend,the
weekend and i would love to hear the sounds of the ocean.That is the best sound to fall alsleep to and i
loved to see the lighthouse and go in it".John really loved Georgia almost as much he loved Flordia he thought
the people there were so nice.They made him feel welcomed and John still rembers when he went to Paris France
one year and he saw and went to the top of the eiffle tower and saw the city of Paris and was a great view.He
also like to eat the croissants.He had such a great time he did not want to leave but one day he would come
back that was a goal he had set.